A reflection on the feedback you received from last pitch.
On my original elevator pitch, I received very positive feedback.
Students commented that I did a great job with speaking slowly, highlighting
and addressing a problem, and being confident while delivering my speech. I was surprised by the amount of positivity given in the comments. I guess I was being my own worst critic in this scenario. I did not think anything sounded necessarily wrong or silly, and was very appreciative of how descriptive the comments were when addressing key aspects of the speech that they thought I excelled in.
What did you change, based on feedback?
I did not really change the aspects addressed in the comments, but rather focused on making sure I continued to speak slowly, clearly, and confidently. I also made sure to relate to my core customer and show how my product can add value to their life as well as the lives of their children.
Hi Taylor,
ReplyDeleteGood job on your speech! You did a great job speaking slowly and communicating your point across clearly. Aside from that, I feel like the quality and lighting of this video is a lot better.